دليل لتجنب الأخطاء الشائعة في بناء الجمل في الكتابة الأكاديمية

مثال خاطئ: Because it was raining.

مثال صحيح: We stayed home because it was raining.

مثال خاطئ: After completing the experiment.

مثال صحيح: After completing the experiment, we analyzed the results.

مثال خاطئ: The experiment was successful we obtained significant results.

مثال صحيح: The experiment was successful; we obtained significant results.

مثال خاطئ: The hypothesis was proven correct the data supported our initial assumptions.

مثال صحيح: The hypothesis was proven correct, as the data supported our initial assumptions.

مثال خاطئ: In order to improve the results.

مثال صحيح: In order to improve the results, we modified the experimental design.

مثال خاطئ: The research was extensive it covered multiple disciplines.

مثال صحيح: The research was extensive; it covered multiple disciplines.

مثال صحيح آخر: The research was extensive. It covered multiple disciplines.

مثال ضعيف: The study was conducted. The results were analyzed. Conclusions were drawn.

مثال محسن: The study was conducted, after which the results were analyzed, leading to the drawing of conclusions.

مثال آخر ضعيف: We collected data. We processed it. We interpreted the findings.

مثال آخر محسن: We collected and processed the data before interpreting the findings.

مثال طويل: The study, which was conducted over a period of three years and involved participants from various demographic backgrounds, including but not limited to age, gender, and socioeconomic status, yielded results that were both surprising and informative, challenging many of the preconceived notions that had been held in the field for decades.

مثال محسن: The study was conducted over a period of three years and involved participants from diverse demographic backgrounds. The results, which were both surprising and informative, challenged many long-held preconceptions in the field.